Read the draft carefully and answer the following questions.
What is the purpose of the draft?
Who is the designated audience for the draft?
How has the writer presented appropriate background information or accounted for bias on the part of the reader?
What more could the writer do to get and keep the reader interested in the draft?
Where might the writer add additional detail or flesh out an argument? Suggest specific additions that would help the writer meet the goal of the assignment.
Take any one paragraph and revise it for clarity and conciseness. Suggest other paragraphs that could benefit from the same revisions.
The strongest part of this draft now is
The part of the draft that still needs work is
If you have time, note significant proofreading problems on the draft.
